Subsection 7.3.4 Using Strong Verbs
While we use “to be” frequently in our every day speech, the verb is often too weak as the main verb in formal writing. Uses of “to be” include: to be, being, am, is, are, was, and were.
Writers prefer not to overuse “to be” because English contains plenty of stronger (i.e., more active, informative, and interesting) verbs. “To be” also frequently indicates that you are using
passive voice. Using “to be” too much thus makes your writing boring or too passive. Which passage below do you prefer?
“I was going to the coffee shop when I saw something that was interesting. It was my friend, Sally. Sally was outside and was sleeping on her chemistry textbook.”
“On my way to the coffee shop, I happened upon an interesting (and funny) sight: my friend, Sally, had fallen asleep outside, using her chemistry textbook as a pillow!”
Here’s a list of
Some Strong Verbs to consider using. There are short definitions to give you an idea of what the word means, but be sure to look up any words you use to make sure that the contexts in which you’re using them align with their meaning. There may also be alternative meanings that aren’t listed here, so the dictionary and thesaurus will still be your friends.
Example 7.3.10. Some Strong Verbs.
- Affirm
to assert or support
- Allude
to point out indirectly
- Amalgamate
to combine or unite pieces into a whole, to merge
- Ameliorate
to make better
- Ascertain
to find out or make sure
- Bolster
to reinforce, support
- Censure
to criticize severely
- Concede
to acknowledge or grant something
- Concur
to agree
- Contend
to assert or argue
- Contest
to oppose, challenge, or argue against
- Demur
to object, be reluctant
- Differentiate
to make a distinction between
- Elucidate
to explain, make clear
- Enable
to make able or powerful, to make possible
- Engender
to lead to, to produce or cause
- Essay
to try, attempt
- Exacerbate
to make worse, exasperate
- Excoriate
to criticize or denounce severely
- Function
to act as, operate
- Laud
to praise
- Mitigate
to lessen severity or intensity, to alleviate
- Obfuscate
to obscure
- Pervade
to permeate, spread throughout
- Present
to offer, give, introduce, show
- Squander
to waste, spend, use irresponsibly
- Stymie
to stop, block
- Substantiate
to support something with evidence
- Supplant
to take the place of, replace
- Vilify
to defame or slander